Quick Link: 5 Huge Mistakes Ruining the Romantic Relationships in Your Book

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Hallelujah and Amen! I know this is about romantic relationships so it might not apply to everyone but I feel what  is preaching. I see so many books with obviously unhealthy attitudes about sex and relationships that I had to share her post from The Write Life.

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5 Huge Mistakes Ruining the Romantic Relationships in Your Book

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I’ll be the first to admit that there’s a serious problem with romantic relationships in literature nowadays.

And worse, this issue seems to be overlooked by the large majority of writers — until it’s too late, that is.

The problem: The unrealistic and unhealthy portrayal of romantic relationships.

There. I said it and now people can take notice because yes, there is a serious lack of realism when it comes to the romantic relationships in books..

Authors are writing relationships that are meant to be exciting and intense, but their execution of those couples can be flawed in sometimes very harmful, although unintentional ways.

There’s nothing wrong with writing romance. In fact, adding a romantic relationship to your book can do it some good. The dynamic of love can:

 

Read the full post on The Write Life!

Throwback Thursday! Book Trailers: 11 steps to make your own

Throwback Thursday – sharing some of our great older posts that still are important today!

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Book trailers are videos posted online and distributed via video networking sites like YouTube. These can be big budget blockbuster movie clips, or budget MovieMaker slides to music. You can make it an advert or a social media fun clip that people want to watch. It can be a human interest story made more like a documentary. It can be a cartoon. Essentially, it is anything you want it to be. Anything that catches people’s attention.

You can get a professional to make you one or you can make your own for little or no money. I made this one with Windows Movie Maker (which is on on most PCs). It took me several hours but was essentially free, and you don’t have to be too techy to make one too. Here are the steps you need.

1. Research other book trailers that are similar to what you would like to do. Just search for book trailers on YouTube. decide what you like and don’t like (and what is within your capacity and budget)

2. Write a brief script for the trailer so you can get it straight in your head and understand what images and text you will need ( I just did this on Microsoft Word)

3. Find and download images to match your words. You can use your own or get free ones online by googling “royalty free photo”. I use iStockPhoto which I find easy to use with a variety of pictures and I did pay a small amount for some photos. You can also use movie clips (which I am still learning about!)

4. Import the pictures into Windows MovieMaker (File -> Import Media)

5. Order the pictures.Drag them into the movie bar at the bottom of the screen in the order you want. Right click and Cut to remove again. Basic drag and drop functionality. Remember to save regularly!

6. Add script by clicking on the picture in the movie bar and then clicking Edit -> Titles and Credits. You can add text in various styles, colours and transition effects here. You can add text before, on top of or after your picures.

7. Edit.Once you have got the basic pictures and text setup, see how long your movie is. Most book trailers are no longer than 1 minute 30 seconds. Edit as necessary by clicking and dragging the size of the boxes to shorten the time frame they show on the screen.

8. Find music to match the length of your movie (or cut to fit). I used SoundSnap.com but you can google “royalty free music” to find other sites. I searched on audio length within classical music and listened to a few before choosing.

9. Check you are happy with everything and then Publish your movie to your computer.

10. Find tags.Now you have a file you can publish it to the internet movie sites to get some viewers. You need to know what tags you want to add to your video when you upload it, so I suggest you also research what people are searching on in your genre. I use Google Keyword Search which has a number of tools and recommended related words.

11. Upload your video to appropriate sites.

I have loaded mine to YouTube and Google Video so far. It takes some time per site, unless you use a video submission site like TrafficGeyser which is expensive and really only for companies with lots of video. You can submit manually to sites like Revver, MySpaceTV, Metacafe, Yahoo Video, Book Trailers, AuthorsDen. No doubt there are many more! Remember to also use the embed links to post to your own website, blog and social networking sites.

It’s easier than you think to get a video book trailer on YouTube! Let us know how it goes!

Reposted from http://www.TheCreativePenn.com : Writing, self-publishing, print-on-demand, internet sales and promotion…for your book.

Correspondence from the NaNo fields – World building is hard!

Hello! How are all you writers and NaNo’ers doing? I fell behind on my word count right away as of course all my client’s programs/servers/websites needed attention! But I managed to almost catch up on double Saturday.  I also donated because if you enjoy writing whether or not you participate in NaNoWriMo, they do a lot for writing and writers. The kids program is amazing. And I love having a halo on my name.

I have done fantasy stories in the past, that involved some world building but since the world was sort of ye old English based, world building wasn’t that difficult. This year I am doing a science fiction story that takes place in earths future. It is not dystopian! Yet. Actually, we were about to make a huge mess with huge pollution issues and bad weather juju due to global warming when the aliens come and save us. But they don’t look at us like equals, and not even really like pets. They aren’t sure what to do with us on the very back water of the galaxy and we are so primitive to them. They do save us from ourselves and life is good. For now.

The problem is trying to figure out how a world like this exists. We are much healthier and more responsible. So what do we drink with dinner? Soda is bad for you. Water is boring. Tea, coffee? How does an enlightened society deal with alcohol? There are studies to it’s benefits but too much is hazardous.

My characters end up in a restaurant. How do you deal with that? Do you still have a hostess, waitperson, and a cook? I decided that having these type of people were socially important but not economically important so I added them.

That is what world building is. Which is bad and good for NaNoWriMo! Each time I have to make a decision like this I am caught up trying to figure out the social and economical implications of my decisions. Which take time. Which is bad for NaNo when you are just suppose to write like the wind! Then I decided to write my reasoning’s down and voila! I am caught up on my words again!

Have a great day in your world!

Paula

Quick Link: When Does a Writer Rest? It’s Time to Talk About Self-Care

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You know how much I love self care articles and with today being the first day of NaNoWriMo, a time when people go crazy writing, that this article from The Write Life would be perfect!

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When Does a Writer Rest? It’s Time to Talk About Self-Care

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NaNoWriMo is tomorrow! Are you prepared?

Hooray NaNoWriMo starts tomorrow! Are you ready? Me neither but I am close.  The most I normally do is get a folder prepared in my Dropbox so I can work on my story anywhere. Dropbox is free to start off with and allows you to access your file almost anywhere.

Also happy Halloween!

In my Dropbox folder, I keep my MS Word doc and my excel spreadsheet that I use to track where I am at count-wise.  There are so many good writing tools out there. I use Scrivener for non-NaNo writing because of all the lovely tools it has that I get lost in. When it comes to NaNo though, I love MS word because I can easily keep an eye on my word count.

Because I like to keep a close eye on my daily word count I have created a spreadsheet that helps me to track my daily progress. I realize that most people are fine without doing this but in case you are compulsive like me, I thought I would share the tool. You enter your total word count each day, and then the spreadsheet lets you know how many more words you need in order to reach 50K, how many days are left to reach that goal, how many words you need to write daily to reach 50K by November 30th, and finally how many words you need to write to reach the daily goal.

The Google link should open a copy of the spreadsheet as a new google doc just for you. The Excel link should either download an excel file or prompt you to save it. Both of these programs are very simple and should pose no security risks. Next year I will try and make a pdf form.

Google Sheets

Excel file

Speaking of word count, for some, 50k words in a month is nothing, but if you are like me, that is a real challenge. So remember, “don’t” is one word but “do not” counts for two! What are your NaNo writing hacks?

Be safe and have a great day!

Paula

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Quick Link: Process Goals: 6 Ways Slowing Down and Thinking Small Will Help You Write Your Book

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Is it any wonder why I love Anne R. Allen and of course Ruth Harris when they do a great post like this?

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Process Goals: 6 Ways Slowing Down and Thinking Small Will Help You Write Your Book

by Ruth Harris

Psychologists differentiate between outcome goals (write a book) and process goals (the steps it will take to write a book). The outcome goal focuses on the big picture and the end result—a diamond-studded World Series ring, an Emmy, the winner’s circle at the Kentucky Derby.

An outcome goal (Bestseller! Glowing five-star reviews!) is one over which you have no control. No wonder you feel overwhelmed and intimidated before you even begin.

The big picture is, well, big. You can’t control it and it’s hard to define. Do you want a bestseller? NY Times or USA Today or both? A nomination for a literary prize? Pulitzer? National Book Award? A book your Mom/third grade teacher/college professor will be proud of? A book that will get revenge on the guy/gal who dumped you and prove to the world that they were wrong and you were right?

Even if you can pin down what you want from the book, you still have to write it.

OMG, a book? 60,000-100,000 brilliant, well-chosen words that actually make sense?

Read the full post on Anne R. Allen’s Blog With Ruth Harris

Quick Link: 5 Tips for Creating Believable Fictional Languages

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Today’s offering is a little selective – it’s for people who want to incorporate a fictional language into their story. Fictional languages have really grown with there now being professionals who do nothing but create fake languages. But that sounds expensive and is probably out of our budget. So here is posting over at Helping Writers Become Authors to help us save a few bucks!

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5 Tips for Creating Believable Fictional Languages

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vaj ghu’vam laD SoH laH, vaj jup maH.

Gone are the days when you could speak gibberish in a movie or a novel—think Princess Leia’s scene negotiating with Jabba the Hutt in Return of the Jedi—and pass it off as obscure, exotic fictional languages.

Today, when your characters speak fictional languages, your audience expects these languages to sound real, with natural-sounding vocabulary and an authentic flow and syntax. Blame authors like J.R.R. Tolkien, who spent many decades fine-tuning Quenya, Sindarin, and the other languages in his epic fantasy trilogies.

But Tolkien wasn’t alone. From Jonathan Swift’s Gulliver’s Travels to HBO’s Game of Thrones, using believable fictional languages helps readers believe in your mythology and immerse themselves in your world.

And unlike HBO, you don’t need to hire a team of linguists to start creating your own language. These five tips can help get you started.

Read the full post on Helping Writers Become Authors!

The art of desensitization and how it can help your writing

Prozie’s twin, except Prozie has a cuter nose.

If you have seen the trailer for the next Star Wars movie The Last Jedi then you have seen a Porg. It is that really cute creature that is sitting with Chewbacca and is pictured on the right.

This particular Porg looks an awful lot like my latest rescue kitty, Prozie. Hang with me for a moment here.

Prozie (short for Prozac, my animals are all named after pharmaceuticals) had a very traumatizing start in life, and by the time we got her, she had a permanent “I am going to be ate” look on her face. She was terrified 100% of the time. But slowly we worked with her and while she is still scared of a lot of things, she is enjoying her life.

One of the great tools that we use is desensitization. Basically, it is a process of taking little steps with things that make you afraid until you are no longer afraid of them.

I know, what does this have to do with writing? Everything!

A lot of times our fears are holding us back from doing what we want to do. Spend some time and figure out what is holding you back. For me, it is fear of putting myself out there and being accepted. Break down the issues and figure out what you can do to take safe baby steps towards that fear. Slowly get used to what you fear and you can lessen it’s hold on you. For me, posting here is a BIG step. But each time I do it, I become a little less fearful. The world hasn’t ended and I have yet to become a meme. So far so good!

Life is hard sometimes and growth sucks but it is good for you. What is holding you back?

Have a great day!

Paula

 

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If you build it they might not come, and that is ok.

I have talked before about writing because you have a story in you that needs to get out, or because writing is something that you love. The fact is, its quite probable that you will never become a millionaire by writing and that is ok. You might be able to make a decent living from it, with a little bit of luck and a lot of hard work.

You got this!

The fact is you will have to find your own motivation to keep you going. I was talking about NaNoWriMo this year and trying to encourage everyone I know to join. It is a great challenge and quite fun. My daughter asked about where all my stories are and I let her know they are all here waiting for me to do something with them. My son remembered a story I had written for NaNoWriMo a few years back and asked if he could read it.

BAM! Encouragement received.

I know encouragement from families members is kind of a given but my young adult son remembered this title from years ago, remembered the plot and really wanted to read it. He is a smart kid and he totally did not have to say that.

Because my writing is something I do for me, it is enough encouragement to keep me excited for this year’s NaNo and thinking about brushing up on that novel afterward. Who knows, with enough encouragement I may actually finish something someday.

What is your encouragement?

Have a great day,

Paula

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Quick Link: Fast-Draft Writing for NaNoWriMo and Every Other Month

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Less that two weeks until NaNoWriMo! So here is another prepping article from the folks at Writers Helping Writers!

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Fast-Draft Writing for NaNoWriMo and Every Other Month

by Writing Coach

I am an advocate of intentional writing, which almost always means slow writing, but sometimes it makes sense to write a fast draft of a book – if, for example, you are participating in NaNoWriMo, have a chunk of time with few distractions, or have a fast-approaching deadline you are motivated to meet.

Writing fast still requires intentionality. You still need a plan – a clear idea of the point you wish your story to make and a grasp of the best narrative structure to get you there. That is to say, you need to know what you want your reader to walk away feeling after they read your novel and what they will walk away believing about the world or human nature. You also need to know where the story starts and ends and what the reader will be tracking along the way.

Let’s assume that you know all those fundamental elements and you’re ready to write. How do you write fast?

Read the full post on Writers Helping Writers!

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Quick Link: 5 Tips for Organizing Subplots

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Plots are of course the main point about your book. But the thing about plots is that there is usually a lot of other stuff going on at the same time, otherwise, your book would be as simple as a young child’s.  Subplots help with creating the other stuff and K.M. Weiland has a great post on her site Helping Writers Become Authors to help out.

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5 Tips for Organizing Subplots

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Imagine you walk into a candy shop, but what you discover inside, instead of candy, is display after display of subplots. Enough to make any writer’s mouth water, right? Writers love the idea of subplots. They’re rich, juicy, complex, and full of opportunities for taking your story to the next level. But organizing subplots, or even just figuring out what your subplots are? That can sometimes be trickier.

I’m often asked about subplots, but it’s one of those subjects (like POV) that is bigger than just a simple answer. This is because subplots, when done right, are all but camouflaged within the larger story. Good subplots integrate with the main plot to the point they’re inextricable from the story’s bigger picture.

In short: you can’t master the art of organizing subplots without mastering the art of plotting itself.

 

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Quick Link: How You Can Avoid Making Structural Mistakes in Your Novel

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At Live Write Thrive, C.S. Lakin always has great tips. With NaNoWriMo coming up I thought this would be a great help.

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How You Can Avoid Making Structural Mistakes in Your Novel

by C.S. Lakin

I’ve spent more than three decades writing novels. And at first I had no clue what I was doing.

Like many people, I think it would be a cinch to write a novel. I read voraciously, so why wouldn’t I just intuitively know how to construct a novel?

This is what a whole lot of people think. But perhaps you know the truth by now: writing a terrific novel is complex, like building a house. You have to have the “big picture” in mind the while time you are plotting and writing. And that’s like spinning a dozen plates at one time.

It’s doable, but it does take practice.

So after spending three decades dropping a lot of plates, I spent a ton of time tearing the novel-writing process apart. During those years I attended plenty of writing conferences and retreats and workshops. I read lots of books on the craft, and when the Internet became part of daily life, I started reading blog posts and listening to podcasts and doing all I could to get novel construction under my belt.
Did I make a lot of mistakes? Heck yeah.

I spent years doing things wrong. I didn’t get scene structure—or novel structure, for that matter. Mostly because I didn’t get that there were some basic rules or principles to structure.

I hated the thought of following a formula. I didn’t want to write like everyone else. I wanted to be unique.

And if you get only one thing from today’s post, make it this:

 

Read the full post on Live Write Thrive.

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“Now re-edited” – the kiss of death or at least stinky breath.

About once a week during one of my day jobs I come across something interesting. I will see an ebook and in the beginning of the description it will say something like this:

Now re-edited!

Usually accompanied by a date when the supposed re-edit took place. And my first thought is what a shame and a waste. Here is someone who didn’t take the time, for whatever reason, when they first put their book up on Amazon to hire a professional editor. People complained because if a book is horribly edited they will complain and take stars off. The author listened to the complaints, which is a good thing, and got professional editing.

But here’s the problem.

Most of the people who looked at the book to try and decided if they want to buy it will never look back. Some of the new potential buyers will look at the comments and not pay attention to the “Now re-edited” part, and some will notice the update but will be turned off by the fact that the author didn’t put their best out there, to begin with.  That’s a whole bunch of lost audience in a very competitive field.

Your story may be great, but the fact is there are many great stories out there. The problem for readers isn’t finding a story they want to read, it is trying to find the best story and adding it to an already full TBR pile.

The added sad fact is you had already gotten people to read and comment on your work. That is an amazing step that a lot of writers would almost give a tooth for – but instead of glowing reviews you get, at best, a couple of stars and the explanation that you could use a good editor.

Lessons learned for some, warnings for others. I know editing can be expensive. But when you think about all the love, energy, and time you spent on your literary baby isn’t it worth it to scrimp and save for some good editing so you never have to re-release as re-edited?

What do you think?

Oh and have a good day!

Paula

PS The fires here in California are not getting as much press but it pretty devastating. I know we all have been facing a lot of disasters but here is a site that gives you places if you want to help!

Quick Link: How Your Flexibility is Actually Hurting Your Writing Career

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I chose to post this article because it is so me, just in case it is so you as well. Sometimes the best thing you can do for yourself is to learn how to say “no”.  At The Write Life, author Adam Hughes teaches us how to set boundaries.

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How Your Flexibility is Actually Hurting Your Writing Career

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I hurt just looking at this

It’s fashionable these days to be flexible in all areas of life.

The demands of your job are always changing, your family dynamic is in perpetual flux and news breaks in a flash.You have to adapt or you’ll be left behind.

However, I’m here to tell you that being too flexible can actually hurt your writing career.

If you don’t have a strong, unwavering foundation, our frenzied world will swallow you up.

And nothing is more vulnerable in this regard than your writing — the next “urgent” matter is always waiting around the corner to commandeer whatever time you thought you had to write.

Only by standing steadfast in your convictions can you protect your writing career against the ravages of the mayhem.

Here are three ways being inflexible can actually make you a better writer.

 

Read the full post on The Write Life.

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Quick Link: Don’t Fall Prey to Publishing Scams: 7 New Writer Mistakes to Avoid

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Congratulations to Anne R. Allen for the awards given to her blog. We know she totally deserves the praise. Especially for articles like this. There are so many scammy people out there, I do so worry about new writers being taken by them. So caveat emptor – buyer beware and become knowlegable with this great post.

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Don’t Fall Prey to Publishing Scams: 7 New Writer Mistakes to Avoid

by Anne R. Allen

We all make mistakes. It’s how people learn. But some new writer mistakes can end a writing career before it starts. They play into the hands of the predators who make money off the delusions of newbie writers.

Ruth and I are long-time industry veterans, and as we say “we made the mistakes, so you don’t have to.” We were jazzed when two organizations honored us for our work this week.

Author Marketing Services named us one of the “50 Kickass Resources for Indie Authors.”

And the site “10 Greatest” put  us on their list of “Top Writing Blogs

So here are some of the new writer mistakes we want to help writers avoid.

1) Writing-in-a-Garret Syndrome

It seems half the people I meet are “working on a book.” I met one at the supermarket this week. He wanted to tell me about struggling with his opus—at great length. I tried to be polite, but as my bourbon-caramel gelato began to melt, I suggested he join the Nightwriters in San Luis Obispo—an excellent group for writers at all levels. (And you still have time to enter their annual writing contest, The Golden Quill Awards. More info in Opportunity Alerts.)

“Oh no,” supermarket man said. “I’ll never show my book to anybody. They might steal my ideas. They can read it when it’s published.”

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